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Thank you for your correction.
That is exactly what I want.
- solution or technology that -
サトー判断:any solution or technology for hard disc encryption which is available to prevent -
Reviewerさん(US)提案:any hard disc encryption solution or technology that is available to prevent -
-al, -ing
サトー判断:critical business-impacting information
Reviewerさん(US)提案:critical, business-impacting information
be divulged
サトー判断:from divulging -
Reviewerさん(US)提案:from being divulged -
due to - of -
サトー判断:that theft or loss of mobile computer can cause?
Reviewerさん(US)提案:due to theft or loss of mobile computer?